Return visit letter

Return visit letter

We are a national chain-like jewelry brand called BOJING ERMAN that focus on colorful jewelry market. After  knowing your brand and products from one of our supplier, we have glanced over your website carefully to see whether we have the opportunity to cooperate. As a fashionable brand, we have to keep up with time and continuously provide new products to the market to acquire market share.

We Will Write a Custom Essay Specifically
For You For Only $13.90/page!


order now

And now we are writing to you to give you some feedback regarding the website, including the your logo, and the brand, the product.

As a fashionable brand, we have to keep up with time and continuously provide new products to the market to acquire market share. Therefore, we focus more on the trend, the style of jewelry than on the connotation of jewelry itself. Because those who keep up with trend will spend more on the jewelry and contribute more to our industry. On the other hand, those who pay high attention on health, tend to pursue class or nature. We think it is too hard for a newly start up business. So in order to get more orders, we suggest you change your target market and your design concept.

As for the brand name Nico, which comes from your designer™s name, we think it is suitable for a popular brand, because it is easy to pronounce and to memorize and advertise. Also, this give a connection between the customers and the designer, if the customer resonates to your product, the name will strengthen that.

We hope these advice can help you position your brand more precisely. Looking forward to cooperate with you.

;, [-Z]

Add a Comment

Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *

x

Hi!
I'm Victoria

Would you like to get a custom essay? How about receiving a customized one?

Check it out